Febuary 15th Contest. Closed. CONTEST WON BY BILLIE

Details: You will need to write a story to do with Yourself having the chance to invite Michael Jackson to your house for one whole week, it should include:

1) Meeting Michael Jackson for the 1st time (weather you have or havnt, remember it's just a story)
2) Inviting him to stay at your house... (what plans you will have & what you will be doing while he's stayin with you)
3) It should be round about 5-6 paragraths long.

Contest will start on 15th Febuary.

List of name in contest: (list closed)

Billie Jean Beauty Queen
Jeff Dunhams Wife
TheILJ
El

Come on everyone get your name down.

REMEMBER: Contest does not start till 15th Febuary, DO NOT post any story's till after start date.

Thanks,

Ian.

I want to take part!

Thanks, Your in Billie Jean Beauty Queen.

This contest won't start if there is no more then 5 members taken part as i find it a waste of time, therefore if this happens i will wait untill the forum becomes alot more active before contests are posted & prizes made available.

Ian.

Oh common people, its not that hard to make a story - just invent something ,be creative ! Is not important to win the prize but to try your best and have fun! So just give it a go!

well said billie jean beauty queen

=] aren't you people tired of that "billie jean beauty queen" thing? i am , it personally takes me a lot more time so would be glad if u continue with billie for now on - it feels more like you're talking to me cuz everyone says it in school and home anyway! it's not that i don't like the long version but you people get on with each other by the first names - like steph,ian,adam...etc soo if its easier for you it works for me =]

I might try this, but I'm not so sure.

madonna_mj wrote:

does that mean you're going to take part? (hope yes, we need more people to start it)

madonna_mj wrote:

if this you putting your name down the you need to say so...otherwise it will be a warning added to your account as its not related to the topic...i'll give til the end of the day to respond.

Not looking good this is it lol ....i thought quite a few people would take part, how hard is it really to write a story?

Anyway we shall see what happens.

Sometimes it's hard for me to write story if I can't think of anything to write. Also sometimes it takes me forever to write a story even if it's a short story.

I've decided to give this a try.

um , i will give it a ry anyway, im not a good writer at all but i will try

thank you =]

I'm not much of a story writer but I'll think it over.

Your in.... 1-2 more would be great & will get this contest the go ahead, otherwise contest will be cancelled.

So...are we doing the contest or not? I've done my story, can post it anytime. =]

I also finished my story and I can't wait to post it.

Allright, thank you! Here's my story! =]

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Here's my story that I wrote on the 1st:

Meeting Michael Jackson

I was in my room watching Michael Jackson's This Is It on DVD. Just as it went off I heard a knock at the door. At first I thought it was someone else but then my mom came into my room and told me that I had a visitor. When I saw who it was I nearly fainted. When my mom left I told Michael that I thought that she'll never leave. I gave him a passionate hug. When I was hugging him I didn't want to let go of him.

After we stopped hugging I asked Michael if he would like to dance with me. He said he would love to. I think asked him if he could teach me the dance to "Will You Be There?" because I love that dance. At first I wasn't getting the hang of it but Michael kept helping me and I finally got it after the tenth time. I also asked him if he could teach me how to do the "Moonwalk". Well of course he did.

After that I got out the Playstation 2 and put in my Dance Dance Revolution Extreme 2 and asked Michael if he would like to give it a try after watching me do it. "So Michael would you like to watch me do this first?" "Yes I would. I can do it after you?" "Of course you can." After I did the songs I wanted to do it was Michael's turn. I saw that he was just a little better at it than I was.

The next day Michael went with my mom and I to my Grandma's house. When my favorite uncle saw who walking in with me he couldn't believe it and I told him not to call Michael what he always calls him. But knowing my uncle he did it anyways and Michael didn't like it when my uncle called him "Michelle". He told my uncle, "My name is Michael, not Michelle." "You tell him, Michael." Then my uncle starting saying more negative things about Michael that both Michael and I didn't like to hear.

Michael than sang "Leave Me Alone" to my uncle. After that my uncle actually left him alone for the rest of the day. Which shocked me because I know my uncle won't ever do that. I then asked Michael if he could sing my favorite song of his. He knew what song was my favorite because I told him the night before. So then he started singing "This Is It".

After he sang "This Is It" I asked him if he would like to go outside and dance with me in the grass in the front yard. As we were about to dance I held out my hand to Michael and started singing "Can I Have This Dance?" Which I have on my laptop which I brought with me to my Grandma's house. As we were dancing and I was singing to "Can I Have This Dance?" Michael also started singing with me to that song. After the song was over Michael gave me a kiss. And no it wasn't a kiss on the cheek.

I’ve been trying to escape the ordinary for the whole of my life. Maybe that is why being a grown-up person I still believe in fairy-tales and cry like a fool over some sentimental moment in my favourite book. In fact grown-up world is such a bore that you can’t help saying: “I wish I were a child again!” Only children can be so sincere, so pure and so nice!
Sometimes I am exhausted and want to fall asleep and dream wonderful dreams which make everything possible. Once I had an unusual dream, it was half reality half imagination. In my dream I stood by the open window and looked at the night sky. I was upset. Suddenly I heard a calm melody and a pleasant voice, which said “You are not alone, calm down, everything will be OK!” At first I couldn’t understand where it came from. But then I realised there was somebody in the room!
“Who are you? Why have you come here?” I asked. “I am here because I don’t like it when people are disappointed and sad!” was the stranger’s reply. “You aren’t Peter Pan from Neverland, are you? I tried to joke. “Of course not. My name’s Michael and I am here to show you that life isn’t over, it still goes on and it is beautiful and exciting as ever.”
And Michael the Entertainer did as he promised. At first he took me to the river Volga. I was so much surprised! “How do you know about this place?” – I wondered. But he only smiled at me. At last he spoke again: “Do you see the river? It’s full of water like your life is full of different events. Do you see that river bent? Would you like to know what is over there? Then don’t hesitate! Go ahead and you’ll see that your life is full of surprises! Don’t overlook!" And I looked and thought, thought and looked…
Then we came to the Sokolovaya mountain and again I was bewildered how he knew about that place. But he took a bird’s eye view of my town and went on: “Don’t you feel that this place is the meeting point of the winds? Doesn’t it inspire you to act? Remember what you liked to do! Why did you give up sewing and design? Is it because nobody liked your creations? Never give up! I think you have a lot of ideas and you could help me with my costume for the next show.” “To design and sew a costume for Michael Jackson! For his show! It can’t be true!” I couldn’t believe my ears. But the next day we went to the best shop in my town and bought wonderful sparkling sliver cloth, then we started to work, we shared ideas and discussed them for hours. And I did it! I made the best costume for Michael! He looked great and was very pleased with it!
I was so happy that I woke up. I have never felt such happiness before. That dream made me understand many things and I will keep for the rest of my life the piece of silver sparkling cloth that I found in my sewing kit some days afterwards.

Hey, what happened to the contest ? It seems so...dead!