small poem...........plz read it!

i wrote this poem as a tribute to mj, its small and short , but i'll post it anyway:


It's been so long
since you went to the sky
it was so hard
just to say goodbye
whenever we see ur pictures
tears come to our eyes
whenever we hear you
you voice makes us cry
we just wanna tell you
we hope you rest in peace...... in the sky

copyrights preseved for afnan (TheILJ)

heartbreaking, I love it.
infact, can i get permission to blog it?

thanks

yea ofcourse,blog it.

ok, thx

I like the poem. It's amazing that I'm 22 years older than you and I feel the same!

thanks for gethting by and replying

i sit everyday thinking about writing anything,(stories , jokes, poems) and oneday this one poped to my head (not all of it, just the beggining) so i directly wrote it here


(iknow, im talkative,sorry)

It's OK (Imean your talkativeness). It's always nice to talk to the person who shares your ideas!

I think i might be more talkitave than you

this talktivness sometimes gives me ideas and inspiration to write , so i keep talking all the day, and if i didnt found someone ill talk to my self

Lol. I write when i ament online. which meens i never write

lol

i think they have to make schools online, its better than getting up everyday, getting ready ( i hate it because i have to take at least 15 minuits only to fix my hair) so you can sit in home and take lessons

CRAZY IDEA , i know, i told u im talkative

Well, my hair is growing down(Like MJ's.) unpurposly so i dont need to do anything to it

youre lucky, but even if it grows up you will not need alot of time to fix it, because youre a boy

im a girl, so i have to struggle every morning

Then shave it all off....... problem solved

Beautiful tribute...I got emotional reading it

The poem is worth a million mozzas. Copyright it before someone finds it

thanks

and ill copyright

I copyrighted your name on my blog

thank you for that

The discusion has changed alot
From great poem to copyrighting

TheILJ wrote:

i wrote this poem as a tribute to mj, its small and short , but i'll post it anyway:


It's been so long
since you went to the sky
it was so hard
just to say goodbye
whenever we see ur pictures
tears come to our eyes
whenever we hear you
you voice makes us cry
we just wanna tell you
we hope you rest in peace...... in the sky

copyrights preseved for afnan (TheILJ)

copyright thing
can i use your poam on my forums page
i will tell all that you write this poam as michael tribute

The poem has reached 500hits on my blog

witcanna ,yea, you can blog it

coldwater , i didnt imagen that it gonna be that good, im surprised

*tears*.. you're a good writer!
i believe that michael will love it