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    12 This Is It

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    12 This Is It

    Post by The Mad Hatter's Wife on Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:13 pm

    The Main Characters
    Michael: Michael Jackson
    Elizabeth Granger: Me

    The Granger Family
    Elizabeth's mother, Terri Granger: Terri Irwin
    Elizabeth's father, Colby Granger: Dylan Bruno
    Elizabeth's older brother, Sportacus: Magnús Örn Scheving
    Elizabeth's younger sister, Stephanie Granger: Julianna Rose Mauriello
    Elizabeth's younger sister, Trixie Granger: Sarah Burgess
    Elizabeth's younger brother, Pixel Granger: Kobie Powell
    Elizabeth's younger brother, Stingy Granger: Jodi Eichelberger
    Elizabeth's younger brother, Ziggy Granger: Guðmundur Þór Kárason
    Elizabeth's twin sister, Eliza Granger: Rolanda
    Eliza's boyfriend, Greggory Bruno: Geoff
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    Re: 12 This Is It

    Post by TheILJ on Sat Jan 02, 2010 5:39 am

    please complete it , it seems nice story
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    Re: 12 This Is It

    Post by The Mad Hatter's Wife on Sat Jan 02, 2010 4:34 pm

    I would love to but I haven't started it yet. I don't know how to start yet and I'm currently working on two Jeff Dunham stories and a Star Trek The Next Generation story.
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    Re: 12 This Is It

    Post by Mjk on Sun Jan 10, 2010 12:57 am

    i think it will be a nice story!
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    Re: 12 This Is It

    Post by The Mad Hatter's Wife on Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:15 am

    By the way, I would like some help with this story. If you want to help me please feel free to pm me on here and I'll tell you the title for the first chapter hopefully that might help you a little to help me to be able to start the first chapter.

    EDIT: Forgot mention that each chapter is the title of the song that's in that chapter.
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    Re: 12 This Is It

    Post by Mjk on Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:24 am

    oh..ok,but i'm not good at making stories pale
    i odn't know if i can help you !but i'll try my best Very Happy
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    Re: 12 This Is It

    Post by The Mad Hatter's Wife on Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:45 am

    Chapter 1
    See You Again

    One day on her birthday a beautiful young 26 year old named Elizabeth Granger was about to meet her idol, the King of Pop, Michael Jackson for the first time since she last met him on her Sweet 16th birthday party.
    ELIZABETH: I can't believe I get to meet him for the first time since I last met him on my 16th birthday. I hope that he remembers me.
    TERRI: I'm sure he does, Baby Girl.
    COLBY: Of course he'll remember you, Angel.
    ELIZABETH: I hope you're right mom and dad. It's just that it's been a decade/10 years since we last saw each other.
    Just then Elizabeth was thinking about when she last saw Michael Jackson.
    ~Flashback to Elizabeth's Sweet 16th Birthday~
    TERRI: Baby Girl your father and I have a very special birthday surprise for you.
    ELIZABETH: What's my special birthday surprise mom and dad?
    Before her parents could answer she heard a familiar voice coming from behind her.
    A FAMILIAR: Turn around and you'll see.
    When she turned around and saw who said that she nearly fainted but he caught her before she hit the ground.
    ELIZABETH: You're Michael Jackson.
    MICHAEL: Yes, yes I am. You must be Elizabeth Granger the birthday girl?
    ELIZABETH: Yes, yes I am.
    For a while Michael was singing some of Elizabeth's favorite songs of his and then a few hours later the party was over and Michael had to leave for his world tour.
    MICHAEL (as he kissed her on the cheek): Happy Birthday, Elizabeth.
    ELIZABETH (as she blushes): Thank You, Michael Jackson.
    A few minutes later Michael left and Elizabeth was holding her cheek that Michael kissed and was constantly smiling.
    TERRI: What's wrong, Baby Girl?
    ELIZABETH (as she still has her hand on her cheek): I may never wash my cheek again.
    COLBY: Uh oh.
    TERRI: What 'uh oh' sweetheart?
    COLBY: It looks like our little girl has falling in love with Michael Jackson.
    TERRI: You're right it does look that way, doesn't it?
    A couple of months go by and Elizabeth still can't stop thinking about that kiss Michael gave her on the cheek. As soon as her brothers and sisters and her twin sister's boyfriend walked into her room she broke out into a song called "See You Again" by Miley Cyrus.
    I got my sights set on you and I'm ready to aim
    I have a heart that will never be tamed
    I knew you were something special
    When you spoke my name
    Now I can't wait to see you again

    I've got a way of knowing when something is right
    I feel like I must have known you in another life
    Cause I felt this deep connection when you looked in my eyes
    Now I can't wait to see you again

    [Chorus:]
    The last time I freaked out
    I just kept looking down
    I st-st-stuttered when you asked me what I'm thinking about
    Felt like I couldn't breathe
    You asked what's wrong with me
    My best friend Leslie said "Oh she's just being Miley"
    The next time we hang out
    I will redeem myself
    My heart it can't rest till then
    oh oh oh oh oh
    I - I can't wait to see you again

    I got this crazy feeling, deep inside
    When you called and asked to see me tomorrow night
    I'm not a mind reader but I'm reading the signs
    That you can't wait to see me again

    [Chorus:]
    The last time I freaked out
    I just kept looking down
    I st-st-stuttered when you asked me what I'm thinking about
    Felt like I couldn't breathe
    You asked what's wrong with me
    My best friend Leslie said "Oh she's just being Miley"
    The next time we hang out
    I will redeem myself
    My heart it can't rest till then
    oh oh oh oh oh
    I - I can't wait to see you again

    I got my sight set on you and I'm ready to aim

    [Chorus:]
    The last time I freaked out
    I just kept looking down
    I st-st-stuttered when you asked me what I'm thinking about
    Felt like I couldn't breathe
    You asked what's wrong with me
    My best friend Leslie said "Oh she's just being Miley"
    The next time we hang out
    I will redeem myself
    My heart it can't rest till then
    oh oh oh oh oh
    I - I can't wait to see you again

    oh oh oh oh oh
    I - I can't wait to see you again

    STEPHANIE: Who can't you wait to see again?
    ELIZABETH: Oh, I can't wait to see MJ again.
    GREGGORY: Who's MJ?
    ELIZABETH: My twin sister's boyfriend say what?
    GREGGORY: Who's MJ?
    ELIZABETH: Michael Jackson is MJ.
    ~End of Flashback~
    TERRI: What were you just now thinking about, Baby Girl?
    ELIZABETH: Oh the first time I met Michael on my Sweet 16th Birthday. I still can't get over the fact that he kissed me on the cheek.
    TERRI: Yeah we know.
    COLBY: You couldn't stop talking about that kiss which was only on the cheek for 10 years now.
    Just then someone walked up to the Granger family. No one except for Elizabeth knew who it was.
    TERRI: Who is that?
    ELIZABETH: Mom don't you recognize him at all?
    TERRI: No I don't.
    ELIZABETH: That's Michael Jackson.
    COLBY: It can't be.
    ELIZABETH: Well it is.
    When Michael saw Elizabeth he recognized her right away.
    MICHAEL: Elizabeth Granger is that you?
    ELIZABETH: Yes, yes it is me, Michael.
    MICHAEL (as he gives her a hug): I can't believe it how long ago has it been since I last saw you.
    ELIZABETH (as she hugged Michael back): It was 10 years ago today. My birthday.
    MICHAEL: Today's your birthday.
    ELIZABETH: Yes, yes it is.
    MICHAEL: Happy birthday, Elizabeth. How old are you now?
    ELIZABETH: I'm 26 years old now.
    MICHAEL: You haven't changed abit for the past 10 years.
    ELIZABETH (blushing): Thanks, Michael. I have to admit that you have changed a little bit.
    MICHAEL: Yeah I know. I'm kind of surprised you recognized me still.
    ELIZABETH: Of course I will but my family didn't.
    MICHAEL: They didn't?
    ELIZABETH: No they didn't.
    MICHAEL: Why is that?
    ELIZABETH: Well that's because they aren't your number 1 fan, I am.
    MICHAEL (thinking): Wow she is so much more beautiful than she was 10 years old. Wait I can't fall in love with her she is 25 years younger than me. Actually who cares age is just a number and it doesn't matter when your in love.
    ELIZABETH (thinking): He is more gorgeous and sexier than ever. I know that he is 25 years older than me but age is just a number and it doesn't matter when your in love.
    Later that night Eliza and Greggory were sleeping in each other's embrace. Michael was in his bed dreaming about Elizabeth. Terri and Colby were also sleeping in each other's embrace. Elizabeth was in her bed dreaming about sleeping in Michael's embrace.

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