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    Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

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    Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by Smooth Criminal on Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:47 am

    Details: Create a Christmas poem, with at least 4 paragrapths with at least 4 lines in each paragrapth.... must stand out & appeal to everyone.... do your best! Good luck.

    Winner: 50 Tokens for the winner.

    List of members taken part:

    IppyAuzzue
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    EI


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    Last edited by Smooth Criminal on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:27 pm; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : Contest started - 25/11/09)


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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by ColdWater on Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:20 am

    i will enter! for sure
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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by The Mad Hatter's Wife on Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:15 pm

    Count me in too.
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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by Smooth Criminal on Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:58 am

    List updated - keep the name's coming everyone.


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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by ColdWater on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:27 am

    Will post poem now

    Its totally homade and written by me

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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by Smooth Criminal on Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:06 am

    IppyAuzzue - I'm sure in my first post i did say & i quote "Do not post any poems yet as this contest won't be startin till the 25th" ...which part was not understood?

    The reason i said that was because the full details of the contest have not yet been released, as i will be posting how many words the poem must include as well as things to include.

    So here we are again, with yourself steppin over the mark (which has happened on more then one occasion)

    I have warned you via PM about certain things & giving you a chance, and like i said in the PM you being part of the moderation team you must follow rules as much as anyone else if not more.

    Your poem has been removed - any issues you may have about this PM me & i will be more then happy to reply to you - i will be in touch soon.

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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by ColdWater on Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:14 pm

    I think my internet calender is fast. It does say 26/11/09 at the moment. I hate being an idiot
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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by El on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:50 pm

    Let me try
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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by Smooth Criminal on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:58 pm

    Your in Ei.... Contest will start tomorrow... details will be given in the morning.


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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by Smooth Criminal on Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:18 am

    Contest started everyone - Only the 3 people who put there name down must take part - i will end contest once all creations have been posted.

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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by The Mad Hatter's Wife on Wed Nov 25, 2009 3:21 am

    I wrote this poem 5 days ago. I hope you all like it. It took me forever to think of what to write but I finally got it done and here is my Christmas poem:

    Christmas

    Christmas is my favorite time of year
    Christmas is the time to share
    Christmas brings lots of joy
    To all the little girls and boys.

    Christmas is full of laughter and good cheer
    Christmas is a joyus and merry time of the year
    It's the time to spend time with loved ones
    Also Christmas is the time to have fun.

    Christmas is also the time to play in the snow
    For most people snow makes them all aglow
    Christmas is the time to eat lots of food
    Make sure all year all you are nice and good.

    Christmas is a celebrated all around the world
    Santa brings lots of toys to the good boys and girls
    Christmas is the time to be with family you love dear
    And also wish them a Happy New Year.
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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by El on Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:12 am

    This is my poem. My daughter helped to compose it.

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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by ColdWater on Wed Nov 25, 2009 9:17 am

    Snow is falling
    It's on the ground
    And in the treetops too
    Comes in Winter
    Leaves in Spring
    With baby animals that are new

    Santa is riding
    Up in the sky
    Eating his mince meat pie
    Down the chimney
    Out the door
    While everthing is nigh

    Snowflakes are dropping
    On the floor
    And on the rooftop aswell
    Comes with a breeze
    Melts on my hand
    Christmas is going well

    Snowmen standing
    Right outside
    And in the park also
    Made by me
    Melted by the Sun
    Uh Oh NO!


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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by Smooth Criminal on Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:32 am

    Thanks to everyone takin part, those look pretty good, i will announce the winner later on this evening so it give's me chance to have a good look through all 3 of them & decide which one i like best.

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    Re: Christmas Poem Contest - Contest Closed - Winner: EI.

    Post by Smooth Criminal on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:26 pm

    Been through them all...

    Have to say all were good in different ways.

    1st place - EI
    2nd place - IppyAuzzue
    3rd place - Michael Jackson's Wife

    Have to say EI i found your poem incredible, one of the best poem's i've read in a long time, great effort & well deserved 1st place.

    Great try's everyone else... all great poems at the end of the day but they can only be one winner.

    Better luck next time everyone else,

    => 50 Tokens awarded to EI => Contest finished => Topic locked.


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