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    small poem...........plz read it!

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    small poem...........plz read it!

    Post by TheILJ on Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:16 am

    i wrote this poem as a tribute to mj, its small and short , but i'll post it anyway:


    It's been so long
    since you went to the sky
    it was so hard
    just to say goodbye
    whenever we see ur pictures
    tears come to our eyes
    whenever we hear you
    you voice makes us cry
    we just wanna tell you
    we hope you rest in peace...... in the sky

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    Post by ColdWater on Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:55 am

    heartbreaking, I love it.
    infact, can i get permission to blog it?
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    Post by TheILJ on Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:35 am

    thanks

    yea ofcourse,blog it.
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    Post by ColdWater on Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:06 pm

    ok, thx
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    Post by El on Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:57 am

    I like the poem. It's amazing that I'm 22 years older than you and I feel the same!
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    Post by TheILJ on Mon Nov 16, 2009 7:15 am

    thanks for gethting by and replying

    i sit everyday thinking about writing anything,(stories , jokes, poems) and oneday this one poped to my head (not all of it, just the beggining) so i directly wrote it here


    (iknow, im talkative,sorry) Very Happy
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    Post by El on Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:09 am

    It's OK (Imean your talkativeness). It's always nice to talk to the person who shares your ideas!
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    Post by ColdWater on Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:30 am

    I think i might be more talkitave than you
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    Post by TheILJ on Mon Nov 16, 2009 1:14 pm

    this talktivness sometimes gives me ideas and inspiration to write , so i keep talking all the day, and if i didnt found someone ill talk to my self
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    Post by ColdWater on Mon Nov 16, 2009 1:17 pm

    Lol. I write when i ament online. which meens i never write
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    Post by TheILJ on Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:25 am

    lol

    i think they have to make schools online, its better than getting up everyday, getting ready ( i hate it because i have to take at least 15 minuits only to fix my hair) so you can sit in home and take lessons

    CRAZY IDEA , i know, i told u im talkative
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    Post by ColdWater on Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:36 am

    Well, my hair is growing down(Like MJ's.) unpurposly so i dont need to do anything to it
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    Post by TheILJ on Thu Nov 19, 2009 7:05 am

    youre lucky, but even if it grows up you will not need alot of time to fix it, because youre a boy

    im a girl, so i have to struggle every morning
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    Post by ColdWater on Thu Nov 19, 2009 8:00 am

    Then shave it all off....... problem solved
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    Post by TheWayHeMadeMeFeel_LCJ on Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:14 pm

    Beautiful tribute...I got emotional reading it
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    Post by ColdWater on Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:51 am

    The poem is worth a million mozzas. Copyright it before someone finds it Exclamation
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    Post by TheILJ on Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:46 pm

    thanks

    and ill copyright
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    Post by ColdWater on Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:13 am

    I copyrighted your name on my blog
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    Post by TheILJ on Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:23 am

    thank you for that
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    Post by ColdWater on Tue Dec 08, 2009 12:41 pm

    The discusion has changed alot
    From great poem to copyrighting
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    Post by witchanna on Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:55 am

    TheILJ wrote:i wrote this poem as a tribute to mj, its small and short , but i'll post it anyway:


    It's been so long
    since you went to the sky
    it was so hard
    just to say goodbye
    whenever we see ur pictures
    tears come to our eyes
    whenever we hear you
    you voice makes us cry
    we just wanna tell you
    we hope you rest in peace...... in the sky

    copyrights preseved for afnan (TheILJ)
    copyright thing
    can i use your poam on my forums page
    i will tell all that you write this poam as michael tribute
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    Post by ColdWater on Sat Dec 12, 2009 8:02 am

    The poem has reached 500hits on my blog
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    Post by TheILJ on Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:59 am

    witcanna ,yea, you can blog it

    coldwater , i didnt imagen that it gonna be that good, im surprised Shocked
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    Post by Mjk on Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:10 pm

    *tears*.. Crying or Very sad you're a good writer!
    i believe that michael will love it Smile

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